So, two questions for other readers:
1) How DID the skaa girl survive the Steel Inquisitor? It was pretty jarring to have her show up alive in the romance chapter, and seemed really off. And where did Roan come from? He apparently slept next to her every night but wasn't mentioned in either chapter with her in it?
2) Who was Kem supposed to have killed? It was Len who killed the young noble, so I was lost there as well. Unless another of the 20 or so fleeing skaa found another to kill from the family (though wasn't he the only one left behind)?
Other than that, I really loved it and got extremely excited for the game after reading. Damn fun.