Ok, so got some time on this this morning, here's V2.0
http://tiny.cc/288vx -- I think a significant improvement.
Catodon, I ended up opening this, which I think borrows a lot of what you were trying to say combined with some more text direct from the book.
Fantasy Craft is powered by one of the most robust RPG
rule sets available, based on the oldest, most respected RPG
on the market. Though similar to other d20-style products,
it varies in many ways and
as a general rule any
mechanics not expressly included have been removed on
purpose. Some of the most common questions are about
attacks of opportunity, iterative attacks, and move/attack
actions, none of which are featured in Fantasy Craft.