Since I'm limited to only 2 pages, I'm purposefully excluding optional rules
We're right up at the limit of text now, anything else that gets added means other stuff gets deleted.
Largely I'm trying to avoid editorializing, though I have been deleting lines here and there to make things fit
Commentary on the guide sheet.
Size modifier applies to characters as well, for medium characters this is zero.
I’ll leave this up to you but for new players highlighting FC’s differences will be useful. I Suggest the following:
I’d put ‘threats, errors and criticals’ right after ‘checks’
That's actually how I had it originally, but was trying to squeeze space -- it seems like you're saying "make it more narrative" -- is this right?