Proof Reading: Adventure Companion

[Deral]

These are more errata, but...

Just a passing thing as I'm pouring over the book, Cliff Born on pg 130 gives Water Vehicle Focus and Forte.

Also, as I'm continuing through, I don't know if Desert Crest's Kali's Kiss is lacking the usual "only once per round" clause on purpose or accident.

It does not have once per round because it is limited to the number of uses per combat instead.

Actually I just came back around after reading over the rest of the feats and realized this was likely the case, since it happens again with the Stone Crest's gaze.

[Psion]

What's a skill forte?  (I'm not familiar with Spy Craft)

They basically worked like fortes did with weapon proficiency: spend an additional slot, and you get a +1 on skill checks with that focus.

I honestly have a hard time picturing running the game without them. My game is coming up on 10th level, and the game is primarily set on an island. Carriages and horses are rare, a privilege of the wealthy. Everyone with sufficient ride skill having one or both would simply seem odd, given the setting.

[Crafty_Pat]

We'll look at the skill forte thing. They don't exist in Mastercraft, so we'll probably replace those bits with something else at some point.

[Typhon]

Just got mine yesterday so will be kinda spotty for proof reading (it's more like reading but just happen to notice something! lol) but will note anything here. =D

Page 58
Bonus Feat: Ghula’s Blessing (see right)

Think that's supposed to be "left"
Unless it's referring to page 59 then you might just wanna put in (see page 59)

[Golden Dragon]

On p. 26, there is the tautology:

1 Silver Leonis = 1 Silver Leonis.

[Crafty_Alex]

On p. 26, there is the tautology:

1 Silver Leonis = 1 Silver Leonis.

Well, it's true... Obviously one too many Leonis in there.

[Wolverine]

Page 48, 'The Old Ways': The last paragraph on the page contains "...be silent and you may speak with you." Should it actually be "...they may speak with you."

[Deral]

Page 48, 'The Old Ways': The last paragraph on the page contains "...be silent and you may speak with you." Should it actually be "...they may speak with you."

Without context and on it's own the original is actually rather deep.

[aegis]

Page 32, Hestaria's Lance: "it takes its scared duty" -- booh!

[SilvercatMoonpaw]

I can't be sure if this is a misused word (perhaps a placeholder or something that forgot to be defined) or something I missed:

p. 32, Corlanteum's Sigil: "...in which Southrons besieged the city..."

[Gentry]

Southron is an archaic usage, meaning "dudes from south of us". It's not something you're likely to see outside of Tolkien, and even there it's rare, so you aren't to be blamed for asking. 

[Wolverine]

It's not something you're likely to see outside of Tolkien, and even there it's rare, so you aren't to be blamed for asking. 

I'm reading an alt-history novel at the moment where the Confederacy won the Civil War and the northerners keep referring to the victors as southrons. I was a little taken aback at first as I kept imaging the Confederate army marching north on the backs of Oliphants

[mach1.9pants]

LOL first thing that jumps into my head too.

[vardeman]

It's not something you're likely to see outside of Tolkien, and even there it's rare, so you aren't to be blamed for asking. 

I'm reading an alt-history novel at the moment where the Confederacy won the Civil War and the northerners keep referring to the victors as southrons. I was a little taken aback at first as I kept imaging the Confederate army marching north on the backs of Oliphants

Guns of the South?

[Wolverine]

Guns of the South?

Nope, Bring the Jubilee. There were airships on the cover so I had to buy it.