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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #30 on: December 13, 2011, 01:00:33 AM »
Chapter Eight.

Chapter Eight of Big Sister is now live.

SHIVER - as Sara Corvus tells Becca what she needs to hear!
GASP - as Antonio Pope reveals the sinister truth behind the mission!
RAISE AN EYEBROW - as Antoine Ginsburg talks just a tiny bit about himself.

And because we really love you, there's Chapter Three of Recycled, too. Learn what happened when Sara Corvus woke up after the augmentation procedure. (Hint: She wasn't happy.)

Happy holidays, everyone. Hope to see you for another blockbusting bionic year 2012.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #31 on: April 15, 2012, 11:36:04 AM »
Chapter Nine.

The newest chapter of Big Sister brings you:

- We finally figure out what Antoine Ginsburg's deal is. Well, part of it. :)
- Pope and Caulfield scheme against each other.
- Jaime has one of those Jaime moments.
- Diego Valdez makes a choice.
- And Richard Earlmeyer demonstrates, once again, what a dick he is.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #32 on: July 16, 2012, 09:31:48 PM »
Chapter Ten.

In this chapter, you will find:

- Our best attempt at advising would-be fugitives to non-extradition countries about valuables that are easy to transport and fence
- Mixology 101
- Everybody Was Kung-Fu Fighting! Well, no, not really. Actually, it's a bit of a fumbling mess. People get hurt.
- All this and more guns, guns, guns!

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #33 on: November 06, 2012, 09:10:40 AM »
Chapter Eleven.

This cavalcade of rare treasures includes:

- More brawling!
- Less gun safety!
- All-around disobedience!
- The first appearance of a tactical breach presented as a Rashomon!

Enjoy.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #34 on: March 16, 2013, 10:53:00 AM »
Chapter Twelve.

In this chapter, we...well, actually we promise all the exciting myth arc stuff and more Recycled for the next (and final) chapter of Big Sister. But don't run away! There's character building in this one!

...I said don't run away!

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #35 on: May 08, 2013, 07:35:59 PM »
Wouldn't dream, I'm eager to see how it all shakes out.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #36 on: July 07, 2013, 11:40:25 AM »
Chapter Thirteen. It ends, tonight. (Well, Big Sister, anyway. Rebuilt itself keeps on trucking.)

Further mytharcing! Further emotioning! Further adventures in chemical weapons, because I know you guys were chomping at the bit for that. (But I promise, we keep it brief this time.)

Also! Check out Chapter Four of Recycled, where...okay, if you've been waiting for us to stop pulling punches on the darker side of bionics, then this is the chapter for you. Everyone else - you're about to see what is possibly the new worst moment in the life of Sara Corvus. I warned you.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #37 on: July 07, 2013, 02:33:26 PM »
Big Sister down.
Hmm.
Very "2nd reel" feeling -lots of build-up and anticipation, not so much payoff. Very curious about whether Mr. Buzzsaw signs off his conversations with Sara by saying "goodbye" regularly. Want to punch Becca in the face, but that's probably a good reaction to an effective character.
Heheheheh. Garlic. Yes. Just a touch of foreshadowing there, very very subtle. I'm impressed.

Recycled comes next.

Also, woot! for updates. ;D, Gatac.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #38 on: March 03, 2014, 09:41:42 AM »
While we prepare to rewrite the pilot for...many reasons, here's Chapter Five of Recycled, wherein we discuss suicidal ideation, drinking in the workplace and why material science is amazing. Be there, or be square!
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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #39 on: March 03, 2014, 03:01:41 PM »
?(@#$?. Yes. 8)

You should put more stuff on FF.net, Gatac.
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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #40 on: August 06, 2014, 07:49:56 AM »
The nightmare begins again! Here's Chapter One of the rewritten Rebuilt, with a fresh and (dare I say) more comprehensible start to our saga. Also, because we believe in diversification, we're now up on Archive Of Our Own (AO3), too. Find us here.

Comments. Reviews. Abstract numerical values that map your state of approval to a well-defined axis. We crave all. Go hog wild.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #41 on: January 08, 2015, 10:29:55 AM »
The nightmare continues! Here's Chapter Two of the rewritten Rebuilt. Not as long as we'd like, but it was a natural enough point to break it off, given our real-life time constraints.

And here's the AO3 link.

Feedback is welcome, as always.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #42 on: June 15, 2015, 11:33:51 AM »
Back with a vengeance! Here's Chapter Three of the rewritten Rebuilt.

AO3 link here.

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Re: [Off Topic] [Took me long enough...] Bionic Woman : Rebuilt
« Reply #43 on: April 11, 2016, 11:19:01 AM »
Here we go again! Chapter Four of the rewritten Rebuilt, big freakin' fight included.

AO3 link!
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